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DA Diner Green Shirt by *timshinn73:icontimshinn73:

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Submitted: January 24, 2004
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This is my 3rd design for the t-shirt contest. Any feedback as to what you think works and doesn't would help. I'll post a version on a shirt template very soon. Thank you for taking a look.

EDIT: Slight type adjustments.

If you're interested, here's a link to what this design will look like on a shirt. Thanks!
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~kennerdmcfat:iconkennerdmcfat: Jan 24, 2004, 11:51:56 AM
this is pretty nice i think this will get in i wish the best to you in this contest.

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~dayuse-yuipeter:icondayuse-yuipeter: Jan 24, 2004, 11:56:34 AM
Hahah. I love this. The categorizing is the more amusing part. I hope this one will win. A :+fav: in my books. :clap:

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~xsavior:iconxsavior: Jan 24, 2004, 12:18:02 PM
great idea. really nice work.
One thing that i didnt like is the menu stuff....it just doesnt sound quite right.

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*timshinn73:icontimshinn73: Jan 24, 2004, 12:25:24 PM
Any suggestions you might have to improve the menu would be great! Thanks!
~a-t-o-m-i-c:icona-t-o-m-i-c: Jan 24, 2004, 12:36:23 PM
I think the green version actually works better for this design. Keep em coming, they're excellent!

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~mike-the-vile:iconmike-the-vile: Jan 24, 2004, 12:53:15 PM
This looks adorable and the "menu" sounds so funny! I like it! :hug:

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~xsavior:iconxsavior: Jan 24, 2004, 12:58:17 PM
I dont like the line "THE WORLDS LARGEST SELECTION OF WINGS" mostly because it doesnt fit as well as things like "THE ART & APPLICATION COMBO PLATTER. Im no better at this so i cant think of anything better...sorry i wasnt much help.

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~fairyp:iconfairyp: Jan 24, 2004, 1:00:18 PM
Perhaps it should read 'deliciously deviant'? Otherwise, very funky :)

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*timshinn73:icontimshinn73: Jan 24, 2004, 1:25:27 PM
"deliciously deviant since 2000" sounds alot better! Thank you for the suggestion! It's a real improvement!
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